Don’t take this as I don’t like the coic – I do very much! But…Is it me or does the story in the last couple dozen pages seem to skip scenes or seem a little more jilted than in the first few chapters? I feel like there should be more dialogue or transitional scenes in between some of these more recent pages. I think it really started with the squirt dream sequence arc.
I see an awkward conversation in their future…
“Yeah, our evil alternate universe self blew up the planet. Sorry about that.”
Don’t take this as I don’t like the coic – I do very much! But…Is it me or does the story in the last couple dozen pages seem to skip scenes or seem a little more jilted than in the first few chapters? I feel like there should be more dialogue or transitional scenes in between some of these more recent pages. I think it really started with the squirt dream sequence arc.