No, I just mean when I can’t write the story any more, for whatever reason (hopefully because it’s done as planned in 800-1000 pages). Charlene has a lot of story left.
I’m sure that was only exposition meant for us, and none of the soldiers heard a thing that they’d care to remember. Because Nerd would be too smart to give away important facts like that. 😐
Final verdict, of course, lies with the reader, but I saw it as Nerd really is so in his head that he’d just spout that out… half of Charlene telling him to shut up is annoyance, half is her trying to tell him he’s giving away the game…
I love Charlene.
Y’know, me too. She is an absolute joy to write. When I can’t write her any more, I will be a sad Neal.
Please tell me that isn’t foreshadowing, I will not be happy if our Charlene dies. And thank you for the plot in this update.
No, I just mean when I can’t write the story any more, for whatever reason (hopefully because it’s done as planned in 800-1000 pages). Charlene has a lot of story left.
Yeah, but she’s right. Nerd gave away an extremely important fact: the stones, that seem trivial, are in fact very significant to them.
I’m sure that was only exposition meant for us, and none of the soldiers heard a thing that they’d care to remember. Because Nerd would be too smart to give away important facts like that. 😐
Final verdict, of course, lies with the reader, but I saw it as Nerd really is so in his head that he’d just spout that out… half of Charlene telling him to shut up is annoyance, half is her trying to tell him he’s giving away the game…
Nerd has such lovely flowing locks. I bet he uses Head and Shoulders. He seems the type.
OMG Yes! I’m glad I’m not the only one who fangirls Nerd’s hair.